Wednesday, February 7, 2024

The broken eye ch 1 -33

 Ch 1 pg 1

At the chromeria the white and the two new black guards who lied about Gavin killing that girl see a sea monster try to attack the bridge but then a black whale attacks the sea monster.

Ch 2 pg 7

Being a rowboat slave sucks.  Gavin doesn't like it. 

Ch 3 pg 11

Kip is also rowing a boat.  He's effectively also a rowboat slave like Gavin.  Zymon has h8m blindfolded and he's pointing a gun at him. But kip is gonna kill Zymon.

Ch 4 pg 18

Gavin tells gunner he's really dazen

ch 5

Teia is sad that kip is gone.  The story everyone was told by Kip's grandfather is that in some sort of drunken accident kip stabbed Gavin and they both fell overboard.

Ch 6 pg 32

Kip gets away from zymon

Ch 7 pg 35

Zymon joins a pirate ship whose captain wants to kill gunner

Ch 8

The order of the broken eye is after Teia.  Much like the racists are after Integratio Jefferson.  Teia is instructed to run.  But much like Integratio Jefferson, she'll destroy them, or die trying. 

Ch 9 pg 45

The white summons karris.  She's out of the black guard.  Her uterus starts to frantically travel about her body as all 13 year old boys are aware is totally a real thing that happens. The Teia chapters aren't bad, but pretty much all the female POVs in this book are very bad.

The white wants Karris to manager her spy network. 


Ch 10

teia is surprised when a guy from the briken eye is in her room.  He paralyzed her with pyril.  He makes a compelling argument in that he somehow has her papers and if she plays ball, she'll be a free woman.  If not Andross Guile would be her owner by law.

Ch 11 pg 59

Life as a rowboat slave sucks. Also if the ship sinks during battle, you die.

Ch 12 pg 64

Kip us walking back to the Chromeria in foot. It sucks.  It sucks less after he crafts himself some luxin boots. As night comes he crafts a blue box and red luxin in it to burn to get warm enough to sleep.

Ch 13 pg 71

The old priest

i guess this is an old thijg that happened a long time ago.  They talk about making a person into a green god like its the most normal thing.   also its a thing where each country only uses a single color.  They were recently raided and so they are gonna do the god thing so they can get vengence.

Ch 14 pg 75

Rowboat collides, gavins boat and cannons start tearimg through the boat and tons of people are dying on both boats.  Gavin doesnt die through.

Ch 15 pg 78

K ip is not doing great.  He is trying to walk along the shoreline but he hits rocky cliffs and has to walk through the jungle.  He passes out cause there aint no food and he wakes up covered in leeches.  He solves that problem with luxin and makes clothes out of ultraviolet and yellow luxin.  So he's kinda glowing.  He wanders his way to a farm house.  Luckily, God told this lady he was coming.  Kip has an ok sized penis.

Ch 16 pg 87

These Karris chapters are awful. We don't need to spend several pages discussing her insecurity. 

With some help from the white she's able to get most of Gavin's money from the bank.  They wouldn't have voluntarily given her Gavin's money.  Their expressed policy is that they don't have account names, just numbers and she would have to give the. The account numbers.  But that's BS.  He brought the list of accounts he knew were Gavin's and Karris had someone steal it and a code Cypher from him on the way.  Also they Give the banker some useful information about a competitor.  So now Karris had a friend at the bank.

Ch 17 pg 95

Teia's gotta do one job for the broke Eye and she'll have her freedom. Steal some papers from a spy.  It is a rush job and she hasn't been able to properly prepare and as a result it ain't perfect.  She gets the papers but the spy sees her do it.  The broken eye assasin woth an invisibility cloak has been following her and kills the spy.  He puts the bloody knife he used in her hands and runs away and tells her to run.

Ch 18 pg 104

The attack of the ship worked.   Gunner sends some guys to ransom the ship.  Gunner doesn't know what to do with Gavin.  So he asks Gavin what to do.  The only good advice is to not ransom him to his dad by sending him an eyeball.  His dad won't pay a randsom cause he doesn't want Gavin back and Gavin doesn't have prism eyes anymore.


Ch 19 pg 109

Teia gets away from the scene of the crime and back to the Chromeria. She goes to Kip's room for some reason. Kip is there and he is looking kinda hunky.  Also, he's doing something woth magic the gathering cards.

They go to Gavin's room and Gavin's sex slave is there.  She tells kip to go to the white immediately. Teia finds her papers left by Mr murder for a job well done and she files the paperwork officially and she's free. But the broken eye has TONS of blackmail material on her so she ain't that free.

Ch 20 pg 118

Karris forces herself into the Spectrum meeting as Gavins representative.  Kips grandfather is saying mean things to everyone.  His basic plan is to have everyone do what they can to slow down the color prince's army. Burning the jungle, poisoning the water, etc.   But mostly he wants to name a promaxhos.  

Who is a mystery.  Obiously not Gavin as he thinks Gavin is dead and he claims not himself.  Maybe he thinks he cam get Zymon appointed to that but I don't se how a complete outsider could be appointed. 

In the midst of people bringing up good points and Andross screaming at them, Kip shows up and tells everyone Gavin is alive and he's on Gunner's ship.  He and his Grandfather kinda revise history and blame the whole Gavin overboard thing on grandfather's slave.  It's all a misunderstanding that's been cleared up and we're a happy family again. 

Ch 21 pg 132

Teia tells ironfist about all the stealing she did and how she thinks her old owner is going to blackmail her.

Ch 22 137

Gavin is on the boat.  They are being rewarded for a job well done.  Drinks on the deck.  He's talking to the slave they cal Orlam.  He claims to be a profit.  He knows Gavin is Dazen.  He tells him that orllam chose him to be the Prism.  There's a storm coming.

Ch 23 pg 146

Ironfist take teia to see the white.  Teia eventually tells her everything.  The white asks Teia how brave she is.

Guess: she's going to ask Teia to become a spy for her within the broken eye.

Ch 24 pg 153

Gavin has bad dr3ams about his first freeing as prism.  He drafts black luxin at the nd.

Ch 25 pg 168

Kip is training with the black guards again and it is good.

Ch 26 pg 172

Liv!!!!!!!!!

She's gonna become the ultra violet goddess.  That's the plan anyway.  But first she's gotta go get what we're calling the bane seed and bring it back and then they will put it where they want and the giant mirror of Ru will help them make it grow.

Ch 27 pg 179

A broken eyer comes to Liv and warns her 

not to wear the black luxin the color prince Gave her when she turns into the ultraviolet god.  The Black luxin is intended by the color prince to give him the ability to control Liv.  But the broken eyer warns that if that goes badly, the black luxin might have a mind of its own and consume Liv and then orllam knows what.

Ch 28 pg 182

Kip wants to know what Teia's deal is.  He knows she hiding something from him.

Kip's teacher sucks.  He goes to the white and suggests she be reassigned somewhere more suitable. He also asks for a tutor.  The white suggests Karris.  But it's kinda funny cause she refers to her as MRS Guile. Also, she shows him her magic the gathering card.  She also asks where the cards he got from the lady are and he plays dumb.

Ch 29

Gavin has a bad dr3am about his dead brother.  No, not that dead brother.  The one the died when they were children. 

Ch 30 pg 194

There's a sea battle and I guess they are losing cause one of the guys from the other ship comes over and recognizes Gavin and tries to free him.  He's a red drafter.  But his spectacles are broken and all hope is lost...

...but then Orlam stands up.  He has the manacle key.

Ch 31 pg 201

Remember that girl Gavin threw off the tower?  This is her aunt.  She's having her 13th child.  Turns out her lover is an eye breaker.  He says she can vote for Andross Guile to be the war lord or she can die.  She chooses death.  But he let's her finish having her baby before he kills her.

Ch 32 pg 211

Kips grandfather reveals his rejuvenation to the chromeria and gets himself elected as war monger.  Yeah war.

Also, livs dad appointed a new green who arrived three minutes after the vote.

Ch 33 pg 219

Kip goes to the library and asks for the librarian that helped him with magic the gathering.  She doesn't exists.  I expect she was a plant by card lady to get him to her.  He passes off that librarian asking about the restricted section. That is until he tells him who he is and it's all go right on sir.  There's no locked doors or whatever, it's just books.  But if you're not supposed to be there and you get caught, it's your ass.  Kips totally allowed.  

He pisses off ironfist who just wants to read some books in private. He asks a librarian in the restricted section about forbidden magic the gathering cards and is told there's a special restricted library that information is in.  He gets a permission slip and has ironfist sign it for him.  Kip is gonna pay for thus.  But that's tomorrow Kip's problem, today's kip wants to know about the forbidden cards yo.


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